Rough Cut - The Summoning
Shots that went well:
- Breathing - effective to see the breath of the actors when they are chanting as it creates more of an eerie atmosphere
- The appearances of the girl around the room create fear and tension
- The dialogue is emotional and relevant to help showing the narrative
- The current after effects are effective - colour
- Needs cutting down as it is currently too long
- Maybe remove some more of the shot reverse shots as there is a large amount of these that they may not be needed
- After the girl appears once she can just start appearing everywhere and the chanting in between isn't necessary
- Consider colour grading to black and white when the presence of the girl is apparent so give the feel that she is sucking out the colour - this will help to further build suspense and show a binary between her and the male characters by contrasting the shots
- We also need to finish working on our sound, we will consider layering the chanting so it creates an echoed effect to build suspense faster
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