What we believe went well:
- The 'over the shoulder' shots were both within the boundaries of the 180 degree rule.
- The editing made the sequence look like a classic old fashioned film, which fits in with the theme of 20s New York Gangsters.
- The establishing shot of the feet of one of the characters created mystery and interest.
- The title design was effective, and the use of the $ sign instead of an S linked in with the theme of money.
- The relative status of the characters was clear.
- We broke the 180 degree rule at one point.
- We should have allowed the door to close in the shot where the character walks through the door.
- The plot had some holes in it: What was the purpose of the meeting?
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