Some good content Hannah, however this can be improved before marking. 1. each topic needs to be on a different slide. 2. the key word in each point should be highlighted 3. either the background or the font colour needs changing as on some slides it is too difficult to read.
ok well done Hannah, you comments at the beginning are strong although the last three areas could be developed more, also remember that warner bros is the distributor not the producer and that the target audience for horror is 15-24. 16/20
Some good content Hannah, however this can be improved before marking.
ReplyDelete1. each topic needs to be on a different slide.
2. the key word in each point should be highlighted
3. either the background or the font colour needs changing as on some slides it is too difficult to read.
Okay, thank you miss, I will be sure to get this done
Deleteok well done Hannah, you comments at the beginning are strong although the last three areas could be developed more, also remember that warner bros is the distributor not the producer and that the target audience for horror is 15-24. 16/20
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